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Tuesday, 13 June 2017

hide and seek

One night during the holidays my friends and i whar playing hide and seek out side. It was dark my friend zak and i whin inside got black cloth and hid behind a corner. When the chaser was going bast us we wore friten and giggling at the same time. The chaser hord the giggling and flow deit. He was about to thac my hair so instead i got zak in front of me and he got him. Zak was in to so he didn't tell him if i was there. When they went i run away and hid in another blas.

2 comments:

  1. Nice Job Lukman. You have Inspired me to Writ a story as Detailed as you'res.
    by Deacon

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  2. Great story Lukman!!!!
    You have made me think about the best story I've ever thought of!!! But at the same time i thought you can add bit more words or a sentence!!

    By Andre

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