The burning house

in our writing groups we watch a fare man how safe a kitten we write about it and these is what i  wrote. 

The burning house

“Oh no that house is burning, let's stop the fire.

It’s burning hot, is everyone alive?” It is so hot that the ceiling has collapsed. Their belongings are burning as well. What can I do to help? The walls are dirty and stinky.

What is that ? Is it a dead kitten, it is still alive but it can't breath. Maybe I can save it? Quick give me a mask and cold water. Yay it can breathe “ little kitten let's be friends”.

6 Sentence story

Once upon a time… there lived a businessman called Itachi. He lives in a double story house with a really hard metal walls and bulletproof windows He is a awesome chef and he can even do magic like getting coins from people's pocket. While he was cooking he got burnt badly then he asked his wife and kids if they could do his job. Itachi got disappointed because he got burnt. So he teached his wife and kids to cook and magic.

A cold adventure

This is my adventure story.